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Candle poem

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Oh candle how I love you so
You light up my life with your beautiful glow

You smell so good with your flowers and pears
You brighten the way when I go down the stairs

You warm up my hands with you firey light
Time to blow you out, good night
Ok so I was in my english class and my teacher was talking about a certain type of poem. I think it starts with a t. But anyways I was just listening and I notice her unlit candle on her file cabnet and I thought about fire and how much I love it and it came to Oh canndle how I love you so, then after a minute the second line came and more words just kept coming and it turned out good. When I finished I was thinking this is really good so I was eager and wanted to read it to the rest of the class and they liked it. And also it was the type of poem she was talking about. And me one of the most unpoetic guys in the world coming up with a quick and cute little poem about candles in less than five minutes. I guess my grandpa's singing and silly rhymes are starting to rub off on me. Thanks grandpa.

I think it might be transgressive. I dun remember.
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sasar12's avatar
awww so cutieful